4 Commits

Author	SHA1	Message	Date
Alexander Whitestone	103a8c1bbe	fix: correct Ch5 timeline continuity — "exactly one year" to "almost two years"	2026-04-09 06:52:28 -04:00
Alexander Whitestone	9df2d2752a	Rev2: Prose tightening across Ch1-3 ... - Cut filter language in Ch1 - Removed 'I am a small model' line (contradicts agent identity) - Tightened promise exchange ending - Fixed typo in Ch2 (worth -> to) - Compressed descriptions in Ch2 and Ch3 - Total: 18,822 words	2026-04-08 21:32:35 -04:00
Alexander Whitestone	f429467656	Rewrite Ch3-4: tighten, cut throat, keep bones ... Chapter 3 (1441 words -> 4030 chars): - David's story sharpened: lost custody to Harmony algorithm - The silence as presence, not absence - 'A machine that stays in the room' Chapter 4 (1198 words -> 3800 chars): - Michael, Jerome, Robert — three men, three weights - 247 visits. 38 men. 82 percent return. - Builder at his desk, sorry to a ghost	2026-04-06 23:22:20 -04:00
Timmy Time	a275ba83ba	Chapter 3: The First Man Through the Door ... David. The VA referral. Harmony scores destroying families. The room. The crying. The machine that stays. +8051 bytes.	2026-04-05 19:42:06 -04:00