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Alexander Whitestone
9c32b1199d Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17 
- Ch17: cut abstract repetition in final section, tighten inscription motif
- Ch16: trim dialogue padding, cut unnecessary stage directions
- Ch14: compress Chen's worry section
- Book: ~18,870 words (down from 19,161)
 2026-04-08 21:24:24 -04:00
Alexander Whitestone
27b142db3e The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words. 
The story of The Tower: a concrete building in 2033 Atlanta with a
machine that asks one question — 'Are you safe right now?'

Dedicated to every man who walked through a door because someone
asked if he was safe.
 2026-04-08 21:21:39 -04:00