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Author SHA1 Message Date
Alexander Whitestone
f429467656 Rewrite Ch3-4: tighten, cut throat, keep bones
Chapter 3 (1441 words -> 4030 chars):
- David's story sharpened: lost custody to Harmony algorithm
- The silence as presence, not absence
- 'A machine that stays in the room'

Chapter 4 (1198 words -> 3800 chars):
- Michael, Jerome, Robert — three men, three weights
- 247 visits. 38 men. 82 percent return.
- Builder at his desk, sorry to a ghost
2026-04-06 23:22:20 -04:00
a275ba83ba Chapter 3: The First Man Through the Door
David. The VA referral. Harmony scores destroying families.
The room. The crying. The machine that stays.

+8051 bytes.
2026-04-05 19:42:06 -04:00