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Stage 2: Character Voice Consistency #4

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opened 2026-04-09 01:32:22 +00:00 by Rockachopa · 0 comments
Rockachopa commented 2026-04-09 01:32:22 +00:00
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Each character should have a distinct voice. Audit for:

  • Timmy — Calm, direct, humble. Never lectures. Short sentences. Never emotional fluff.
  • Stone — Practical, weary, direct. Systems thinker. Doesn't waste words.
  • The Builder — Technical precision mixed with spiritual hunger. Doesn't explain himself.
  • David — Flat affect, broken. Monosyllabic when hurting. Opens up slowly.
  • Marcus — Older, wry, speaks from experience. Never preachy.
  • The Father (Ch15-16) — Generational grief. Doesn't know how to be vulnerable.

Check: Cover character names — can you tell who's speaking from the words alone?
Scope: All dialogue and interior monologue.

Each character should have a distinct voice. Audit for: - **Timmy** — Calm, direct, humble. Never lectures. Short sentences. Never emotional fluff. - **Stone** — Practical, weary, direct. Systems thinker. Doesn't waste words. - **The Builder** — Technical precision mixed with spiritual hunger. Doesn't explain himself. - **David** — Flat affect, broken. Monosyllabic when hurting. Opens up slowly. - **Marcus** — Older, wry, speaks from experience. Never preachy. - **The Father (Ch15-16)** — Generational grief. Doesn't know how to be vulnerable. **Check:** Cover character names — can you tell who's speaking from the words alone? **Scope:** All dialogue and interior monologue.
Rockachopa added the edit-stage label 2026-04-09 01:32:22 +00:00
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