Alexander Whitestone 9df2d2752a Rev2: Prose tightening across Ch1-3 ...

- Cut filter language in Ch1
- Removed 'I am a small model' line (contradicts agent identity)
- Tightened promise exchange ending
- Fixed typo in Ch2 (worth -> to)
- Compressed descriptions in Ch2 and Ch3
- Total: 18,822 words

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chapter-01.md

Rev2: Prose tightening across Ch1-3

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chapter-02.md

Rev2: Prose tightening across Ch1-3

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chapter-03.md

Rev2: Prose tightening across Ch1-3

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chapter-04.md

Rewrite Ch4: tighten, cut repetition, keep the core

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chapter-05.md

Rewrite Ch1-6: tighter prose, no fat

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chapter-06.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-07.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-08.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-09.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-10.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-11.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-12.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-13.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-14.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-15.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-16.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-17.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-18.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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