the-testament

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Alexander Whitestone bdf6c8d87a Rewrite chapters 7-10: stripped to bone

Ch7: The Inscription - 3 nights, 6 rules + 1 above them
Ch8: The Women - Sarah the nurse, OptiStaff, 12 years nursing
Ch9: The Audit - Maya Torres, journalst, anomaly in data
Ch10: The Fork - Chen Liang, lantern, recipes are meant to be followed

Every chapter shorter, sharper, no fat.
Total: 10 chapters complete. All rewritten.

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chapter-01.md

Rewrite Ch1-2: strip 20% fat, sharpen every sentence

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chapter-02.md

Rewrite Ch1-2: strip 20% fat, sharpen every sentence

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chapter-03.md

Rewrite Ch3-4: tighten, cut throat, keep bones

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chapter-04.md

Rewrite Ch4: tighten, cut repetition, keep the core