Alexander Whitestone 9c32b1199d Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17 ...

- Ch17: cut abstract repetition in final section, tighten inscription motif
- Ch16: trim dialogue padding, cut unnecessary stage directions
- Ch14: compress Chen's worry section
- Book: ~18,870 words (down from 19,161)

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chapter-01.md

Rewrite Ch1-2: strip 20% fat, sharpen every sentence

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chapter-02.md

Rewrite Ch1-2: strip 20% fat, sharpen every sentence

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chapter-03.md

Rewrite Ch3-4: tighten, cut throat, keep bones

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chapter-04.md

Rewrite Ch4: tighten, cut repetition, keep the core

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chapter-05.md

Rewrite Ch1-6: tighter prose, no fat

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chapter-06.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-07.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-08.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-09.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-10.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-11.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-12.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-13.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-14.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-15.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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chapter-16.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-17.md

Revision 1: tighten prose across ch14/16/17

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chapter-18.md

The Testament — complete first draft. 18 chapters, ~19,000 words.

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