diff --git a/wizard-work/sphinx/archive-lcmm-metadata-2026-10-25/REPORT-lcmm-dossier.md b/wizard-work/sphinx/archive-lcmm-metadata-2026-10-25/REPORT-lcmm-dossier.md
index 60d0219..1fefd0f 100644
--- a/wizard-work/sphinx/archive-lcmm-metadata-2026-10-25/REPORT-lcmm-dossier.md
+++ b/wizard-work/sphinx/archive-lcmm-metadata-2026-10-25/REPORT-lcmm-dossier.md
@@ -96,9 +96,9 @@ The gate was shown to bite, not just to pass:
 
 - **Defect found and closed.** The first gate (v1) verified the dossier but never
   parsed the report. The hand-written table in that report had 4 of 11 version
-  cells stale (v1 where the feed says v2/v3) and 3 truncated titles; v1 still
-  exited 0. v2 renders the table from `dossier.json`, checks it cell by cell, and
-  control F7 mutates a row to prove the check fires.
+  cells stale (v1 where the feed says v2/v3) and 4 titles altered (truncated or
+  abbreviated); v1 still exited 0. v2 renders the table from `dossier.json`,
+  checks it cell by cell, and control F7 mutates a row to prove the check fires.
 - **Abstract edit found and closed.** v2's first run went red on control F3: the
   stored `abstract_sha256` was compared only to the live feed, never recomputed
   from the stored text, so a body edit with an untouched hash passed. C now